The shot composition is lovely & works great & looks very interesting & appealing. Yous voiceover on the fails on viola playing was cute & of course fulfilled the assignment.
Excellent work! When you put the viola up to your shoulder in the diegetic piece, I was thinking - oh please let him be bad - and you were oh so bad. It was perfectly delightful. Both videos are very successful in their comic approach. Adding the viola sounds would improve the voice over piece. Your choices for the assignment though were spot on. You have a very direct voice and vision that comes through strongly in your work.
i love the viola music, very cringing lol... Just no... And the black and white fit the mood. lol Loved it =D
ReplyDeleteNICE CONCEPT YOU CHOOSE TO GO WITH.
ReplyDeleteMark, so brilliant and hilarious. I love the black and white and the narration! LOL Funny genius!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is great!! I love the humor in it. The black and white really helps the audience to focus on what is happening in the video.
ReplyDeleteSplendid! A very comical piece. Well done!
ReplyDeleteMARK HILARIOUS, YAY CAPS \o/
ReplyDeleteThe shot composition is lovely & works great & looks very interesting & appealing. Yous voiceover on the fails on viola playing was cute & of course fulfilled the assignment.
Comical Genius! Clever & well thought out & scripted.
ReplyDeleteExcellent work! When you put the viola up to your shoulder in the diegetic piece, I was thinking - oh please let him be bad - and you were oh so bad. It was perfectly delightful. Both videos are very successful in their comic approach. Adding the viola sounds would improve the voice over piece. Your choices for the assignment though were spot on. You have a very direct voice and vision that comes through strongly in your work.
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